Wednesday, 24 October 2012

I think that's a yes

Just some feedback about my application:

Thanks for your post. Generally, we enjoyed your post and thought it gave some great insights into the experience of studying at the School.

We did, however, feel that you might want to revisit the tone of the piece in places, especially towards the end. I think you make some valid points, but perhaps you could rephrase it a little. Particularly the reference to polygamy might upset some more sensitive people.

We’re having to work to expectations set out for us by wider College and the senior management team of the School to build the School’s brand. Generally we’re happy for our bloggers to write from their experience with a realistic view of their programmes. However, in the context of these expectations, I think you will need to watch out that you that your tone doesn’t unintentionally offend people and just be aware that your posts will be highly visible on the new Business School website and that not only prospective students will be reading them, but faculty and even potential employers visiting the School website will be able to come across them. It’s a great opportunity to increase your visibility to prospective employers and other contacts, but I’d just be careful that the humour of your posts doesn’t overstep a line and work against you.

With the above in mind, we’d be happy to have you as a blogger if you feel that your blogs could fit within these suggestions? As I said above, we enjoyed your post and think you have a lot to offer as a blogger.

Best wishes,


I guess I'll have to have two versions


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